Pain is lovely, it somehow shows you wisdom
A thin line to bitterness but does not equate to it
Pain is relative to anything that reminds me of you
an excruciating sensation that burns inside me
Pain is moving on without you beside me
like a thought of death someone so dear to you
Pain is everywhere and so is Love
I think, they co-exist like Yin and Yang, heaven and earth, life and death
Pain is our past and so is happiness
but they say that happiness is a state of Mind;
I am Happy because I choose to be happy
therefore I am numb because I don't feel Pain.
Naks! ayos ah... jejejejeje pero gusto ko yung huli mong line "I am Happy because I choose to be happy
ReplyDeletetherefore I am numb because I don't feel Pain."... ganun din ako... jijijijijiji
Naks! nakabase pala ako! jijijijiji
ReplyDeleteawh... i really like this poem... nice... great way of expressing your emotion!
ReplyDelete@Xprosaic Onga Pre base ka!
ReplyDelete@Ailee Thank you!
Nice poem Jepoy, but I think you are speaking in paradoxes. You wouldn't be able to write most of the lines in this poem if you really don't feel pain. Don't say you are numb, dahil ramdam ang pain sa mga linya ng tula mo. Happiness is a choice, but being happy doesn't always numb the pain.
ReplyDeleteI sometimes wish there's something I can take to numb the pain I've been feeling. But then again, the pain that hurts me bears the same memories, and reasons why I still find myself smiling. I'm speaking in paradox too, geez. Shit, pasko na, malungkot parin ako. X'(
Nagato (from naruto) said, if you don't share someone's pain, you would never understand them. Ewan ko, pero parang naiintindihan ko ang linya sa tula mo. I just don't believe the last line you wrote. Parang sinabi mo lang yung huling linya mo to convince yourself. It's ok to feel pain. It is denying it that makes the pain worse.
-raf
@Raffy *Sigh* needless to say more, you are correct
ReplyDelete"an excruciating sensation that burns inside me"
ReplyDeleteDiarrhea lang yan.
@Glentot Moment ko to!! *slap*
ReplyDeletebakit may ganitong mga post??? Adik???
ReplyDeletePonkan lumelevel ka na ah!!
@Drake Gising na ang mahal na hari! Syempre naman paminsan minsan kelangan mag emo emohan ng konti, alam mo naman ang mga artista ganun talaga merong self motivation para pag salang sa camera go ng go
ReplyDeleteganda nito a!
ReplyDeletevery nice,sapol na sapol!
hmmm...feelings... oh feelings...msakit ang mawala ka.. ay nag e-emot din ako.
ReplyDeleteUhm, uhm... Pain is painful. I want it to stop.
ReplyDeleteRandom thoughts spill out as a poem?
@Mac Callister thanks for the appreciation. Have a good one
ReplyDelete@Glampinoy Sige lang emote lang ng emote
@Joanna I guess yes, I just tried writing just like this. Masarap din pala yung feeling na you transform what you feel in writing, any form of writing.
napatingin ako ulit sa url. akala ko nawawala ako. nice one!
ReplyDeletecare to follow and exchange links with me... i already followed and added your link at my blog!!!! hoping for more discussions with you!!! take care!
ReplyDeleteso isang lang ba tong self motivation?hahaha anyway..gusto ko rin yung last line..Happiness is a choice..but doesnt mean your not feeling the pain..pwede mo rin kasing maramdaman yun ng sabay eh..hahaha
ReplyDelete@Citybuoy Natawa ako sa comment mo Sir, promise LOL yaan mo sa susunod na post balik na totoong balat LOL
ReplyDelete@Ailee SUre will do
@SuperJaid Parang ganun na nga hihihihi
Aaw nice poem, Jepoy, pero parang hindi ako sanay reading stuff like these from you. Hehe.
ReplyDelete@Angel Dibale Angel paminsan minsan lang yan LOL
ReplyDeleteI agree... :) It really helps get things out of your mind or off your chest.
ReplyDeleteNak nang@#$! lasing ka na naman poy. wala ka sa sarili.
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